Hi friends ....here is again the lucky ducky for a new adventure....
Today, I`m going to explain the favourite piece of technology of the lucky ducky. This is very fantastic.
When the lucky ducky was a little boy, his father give him a piece of technology very funny for he. This piece of technology names ATARI and when the lucky ducky was little, but very little...a baby, he played all the day with this new game that he had.
But is not all happynes on the life of the lucky ducky, beacuse one day arrive to his home a gruop of pirates, a very bads pirates and they stole the ATARI to the poor lucky ducky and he was very sad....
Finally, the lucky ducky was the winner of the lotery and he had a lot of money, however lucky ducky wasn`t a bad man and he give the ATARI to the pirates, and they become happy for the good spirit of the lucky ducky...
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Patricio,
ResponderEliminarI can’t deny that you have tried to write something original, which is good. Unfortunately you haven’t been asked to write a piece of literary work, in this case a kind of fairy tale or a children’s story. So, please, read the asignments carefully before writing so that you comply withy the instructions for the post.
Hi friends ....here is the lucky ducky again for a new adventure....
Today, I`m going to WRITE ABOUT the favourite piece of technology of lucky ducky/ Lucky Ducky’ favourite piece of technology . This is very fantastic/REALLY AMAZING.
When the lucky ducky was a little boy, his father GAVE him a piece of technology WICH WAS very FUN for HIM. THE NAME OF this piece of technology WAS ATARI and when the lucky ducky was little, but very little...a baby, he played all (-) day with this new game that he had.
But not all WAS happInes IN the life of the lucky ducky, beacuse one day a group of pirates arriveD to his home. THEY WERE very bad (-) pirates and they stole the poor lucky ducky’S ATARI and he was very sad....
Finally, the lucky ducky was the winner of the lotTery and he had a lot of money, however lucky ducky wasn`t a bad man and he GAVE the ATARI to the pirates, and they beCAme happy THANKS the good spirit of the lucky ducky...
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