Hello Friends
Again we find ourselves. Today, I will present a wonderful story about my new picture.
This time, it is the "Penguin Revolution".
In 2006 I was studying at the National Institute and the political environment was much dissatisfaction with public policies in education. That year, our vision (how the students in public schools) was that the government saw education as a business, not a right of all people.
This situation caused many problems for the government because they were carried out daily protests in the heart of the capital city of discontent and demonstrations of the academic community.
The students organized themselves and formed a powerful lobby for the minister and the president, so they had to listen.
Over time the changes were just a little bit of everything that we thought to obtain, which shows that there is still much to fight.
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Patricio,
ResponderEliminarIt's interesting that you went through that experience and I'm glad you wrote about it. Now, weren't you supposed to write about your favourite photo this time?
Please compare:
- "find ourselves" and "meet"
- "how" and "as"
I suggest you edit paragraphs 2 and 4, they're not clear enough.